Feedback from my idea

 Feedback for my idea that I pitched:

 

In my media group, I pitched my opening scene idea 3 to my group. The feedback that I received was very helpful towards developing that idea into a reality, unless one of the other ideas is chosen. Both the members of my group liked the idea but thought that there were a few impracticalities that could be altered to making the filming process more doable. For example, the poker scene would be very difficult to pull-off without it looking poor, and we would have to rely on good actors. The actors would also have to be teachers as 17–18-year-old students playing a game of poker wouldn’t give off the same criminal tones as older men playing poker. It would also be a nuisance setting up the cards and making sure the actors could play poker. Also, it would be difficult and impractical to get a piano in a dark room, and for him to be playing a good enough piece for it to sound good, whilst also acting. As oppose to these ideas, we thought that two different scenarios would be better for the scene, for example having a tied-up girl with a bomb near her, and some other form of dangerous situation in the other room and having the police storm into a building where we aren’t sure who is going to be saved. This would allow for more time to prepare an easier and more practical opening scene. It would also cut down the cast size. I am very happy with the feedback that I received, but after listening to my other two members of my media project ideas, I would be very happy to do any of their ideas as I really enjoyed their pitches.